Sunday, September 29, 2013

Untitled, 5.18.13

Let me hear the wind
Feel its breath upon my face
Pulling me onward
Into this place

Speak to me softly
Tell me your name
Hold me in your hands
Just for one day

Tell me it's a dream
But let me feel awake
Hold me in your heart
Just for one day


  1. I like the loosened rhyme scheme. It flies with the free spirit of it.

  2. I like the lines, "Tell me it's a dream, But let me feel awake."