Wednesday, April 17, 2013

Meeting Nature, 1.20.13

On the shaded slopes
We talked, we laughed
We learned about each other

I climbed the mountain
To learn more
Of Nature's hidden wonder

The trees would whisper
And lean down
In order to converse

The flowers smiled
And sang with me
A joyful chorus so diverse

2 comments:

  1. I like this one a lot, though the last stanza reads rather clumsily. Perhaps you could omit some of the syllables in the last line?

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    1. I agree entirely. Would taking out "joyful" make it better?

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