tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2764304796450064775.post6354837592751806910..comments2024-03-13T05:36:51.853-05:00Comments on Have a Nice Day: Meeting Nature, 1.20.13Chava Hallhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04314235298446929056noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2764304796450064775.post-77682975875744767932013-05-29T14:51:49.812-05:002013-05-29T14:51:49.812-05:00I agree entirely. Would taking out "joyful&q...I agree entirely. Would taking out "joyful" make it better?Chava Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04314235298446929056noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2764304796450064775.post-26799498822528349762013-05-29T14:48:15.677-05:002013-05-29T14:48:15.677-05:00I like this one a lot, though the last stanza read...I like this one a lot, though the last stanza reads rather clumsily. Perhaps you could omit some of the syllables in the last line?Janiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16252125053867762449noreply@blogger.com