Thursday, November 14, 2013

Blue Evening, 8.4.13

Dusk is fading
Rosy blue
Twilight drifting
Around and through

Sunset whispers
Insects and birds
Whip-or-wills calling
Hope to be heard
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  1. GlennNovember 15, 2013 at 8:32 AM

    Nice poem, Chava. You need to change "whipsers" to "whispers." Also I would make "thru" "through."

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