Thursday, February 7, 2013

Dreams, 1.2.13

I fall asleep
Into a brighter existence.
Thoughts and fancies
Freely take flight.

The mind's dreams,
Alight, alive and true.
But Awake! and find them
Just shadows of the night.
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  1. UnknownFebruary 8, 2013 at 8:17 AM

    :^) Loverly.

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  2. JanieFebruary 19, 2013 at 7:08 PM

    I really like the first stanza. The second one is a bit harder to read - it lacks the flowing quality of the first.

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    1. Chava HallFebruary 19, 2013 at 7:21 PM

      Yes, I totally agree. I think this is a problem that I and my poems have a lot, and I'm not quite sure how to fix it.

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